Business Services Industry

LETTER-PERFECT BUSINESS WRITING: EXPERTS AGREE THAT BETTER REPORTS YIELD BETTER RESULTS.

Crain's Chicago Business, January, 1999 by CONNORS, MARY

A well-crafted sales letter is a powerful competitive advantage for a simple reason: Few people can write one. By the time executive recruiter Bradley Holden awoke to the ugly truth about his four young associates, he'd nearly taken on a second job -- as a copy editor. ``They couldn't write!'' says the vice-president of executive recruitment firm Korn/Ferry International.

To ensure that his team's detailed reports on job candidates were in top form before they reached clients' hands, Mr. Holden, Chicago-based director of the company's North American industrial practice, found himself logging increasing amounts of time reviewing, correcting and revising. Fractured sentence structure, faulty verb tenses and flabby paragraphs were just the start. The biggest...

Premium Content Partnership | HighBeam Research provides an in-depth online archive library of reference works. HighBeam Research

 

BNET TalkbackShare your ideas and expertise on this topic

Please add your comment:

  1. You are currently: a Guest |
  2.  

Basic HTML tags that work in comments are: bold (<b></b>), italic (<i></i>), underline (<u></u>), and hyperlink (<a href></a)

advertisement
advertisement
  • Click Here
  • Click Here
  • Click Here
advertisement